night.

When it was time to eat, Hao Yun found a small restaurant near the company and arranged a table of food and wine.

Now the company's financial situation is abundant, he did not deliberately go frugal, what fish flavored shredded pork, tomato scrambled eggs, ribs stew and so on all arranged, also ordered a box of beer.

The only pity is that there are fewer people and they are not too busy.

There are only three people in rural cinema, director, screenwriter and secretary. In Yunmeng entertainment, Hao Yun comes by himself. Because it's inconvenient to talk about the script, he doesn't even bring his Wolong chicks.

The name of the screenwriter sitting next to the field is Wang Xingkai. He is like a book writer.

Only that rough appearance, not a little bookish, but like a butcher in the market.

Standing up with a glass, he handed out the wine to Hao Yun.

"Mr. Hao... Or brother Yunshen, when I was in Yanjing before, I often heard people in the circle say that your word is like a poem, which is impeccable in form and meaning. Here's to you, to your literary grace

"You're welcome, you're welcome... Mr. Hao doesn't have to. You'd better call me Hao Yun in the future."

"Brother Yun! It sounds like a good name. "

Field eyes a bright, also nod smile way.

"I think so! Call him Brother Yun! "

In terms of age, Hao Yun is at least ten years behind them. But if he is called Xiao Yun, and he is not polite, he simply calls him Brother Yun.

This not only weakens the age gap, but also does not appear to be born.

Hao Yun also didn't refuse, silently toasted everyone, regarded as the default of this name.

"Brother Tian, I'd like to propose a toast, too. I wish our movie a smooth start and a smooth finish!"

"Ha ha, I'll borrow your lucky words! But you've done two things with this glass of wine. It's not very authentic. I'll have another drink with you! "

"Easy to say!" Hao Yun and Tian Dao touched a cup with a smile, first dry, "wine tube enough, everyone began to eat, we don't mention it."

In Hao Yun's impression, he has participated in social activities many times in his previous life, so he is very handy when dealing with them.

Interestingly, no matter in this life or in the previous one, his drinking capacity is surprisingly good, even if he is not very fond of drinking.

It's like drinking water. I don't feel it at all.

After a few bottles of wine were opened, the original atmosphere of some formality was also opened with the help of the wine and the chatterbox.

"Ah! I didn't expect to write such a spiritual song at your age! When I was a freshman, I couldn't sing, let alone write songs. "

The field said with a laugh.

"Ha ha, your broken voice, not to mention more than ten years ago, may not be able to sing anything now."

Li Xiaohui, the Secretary sitting next to him, also joked with a smile, "other people sing for money, while Lao Wang sings for his life."

"Ha ha ha!"

Listening to the laughter of several people, Hao Yun also laughed in his heart.

Singing to death?

Coincidentally, there is one in his bedroom.

Being ridiculed by Tianye and Secretary Li, screenwriter Wang didn't take it to his heart. Instead, he laughed at himself.

"Well, what can I do? If we can't sing up, we can only buy words and earn a living. "

"Words are no worse than you. I think the words of fireworks are easy to be cold. They are really written in my heart!" The field laughed and then looked at Hao Yun, "Brother Yun, I forgot to ask... Did you read the script, too? How do you feel?"

When he said this, he actually meant to show off.

Although the script was not perfect in his eyes, it was very close to the world in his heart.

Although it's a subjective feeling, he thinks Hao Yun's idea should be the same as his own.

However, what he didn't expect was that when he talked about the script, Hao Yun, who was holding the cup, frowned slightly. It seemed that something was not simple.

"Brother Tian, do you want to hear me tell the truth or lie?"

The field slightly Leng for a while, then looked at Wang Xingkai, and threw the topic to him with a smile.

"You decide!"

Wang Xingkai said with a smile and a wave.

"Just tell the truth, let's accept the criticism! Anyway, it's just the first draft, and there are some changes in the back. "

"I'll tell you the truth," said Hao Yun, coughing gently and straightening his face. "I'm afraid there are a lot of changes in the script... I don't think it's very good just to talk about the outline."

The room was quiet for a while.

After hearing that sentence, the field opened his mouth, and the expression on his face was incredible.

Secretary Li sitting next to him is the same. Obviously, he didn't expect Hao Yun to give such an evaluation.

On the other hand, the expression on Wang Xingkai's face was even more excited, and his whole face was full of pig liver color.

He knew best how much work it took to write the play.

But now someone even told him that the outline is not very good?

No matter how well the articles are written, some of them are not to people's taste, and literary giants can't serve everyone.

But this man is the lyric composer of fireworks. Who else can understand the feelings in that song better than him?

"Brother Yun, I have to say something to you," the field coughed softly and said, "we can speak in a more tactful way..."

Looking at the eyes handed to him by the field, although Hao Yun knew his kindness in his heart, he still felt helpless.

Didn't you ask for my opinion?

Then I'll tell you the truth.

"It's OK. You have the most say in this song. Your opinion is very important. Besides, I also said that I accept criticism." Wang Xingkai shook his head, raised his glass and stood up. "Brother Yun, I'll give you this cup!"

After that, he touched the glass with Hao Yun, who also stood up, and then drank the wine in the glass.

Looking at Wang Xingkai who was obviously angry in his stomach, the field tried to comfort him.

"Lao Wang, don't take it to heart. Brother Yun is just giving advice. After so many years of writing work, you are less scolded by me?"

"I didn't take it to heart, just have one thing to ask!"

With wine in his eyes, Wang Xingkai reluctantly sat back in his chair, looked straight at Hao Yun, and said with some unconvinced emotion, "I just want to know, you said that there is something wrong with my outline, where is the problem?"

Looking at Wang Xingkai, who is more real, the field shook his head in tears and laughter.

Just as he was thinking about how to make it happen, Hao Yun, who was sitting opposite the wine table, said slowly.

"Brother Wang, first of all, I have to say that I didn't mean to offend you on purpose."

Wang Xingkai nodded his head hard.

"I know! I don't mean anything else. I just want to ask for advice! "

Hao Yun: "first of all, in the background of the story, I don't think you need to set it as the Wei state in the period of the separatist regime, and then apply the usual routine of those classical martial arts movies. I'm just suggesting... Why don't you just build up a world? "

"Overhead?" Wang Xingkai was stunned. "It's not so easy... It's not a fairy tale. We have to consider the audience's viewing experience and the most important sense of substitution! "

For this statement, Tian Dao also nodded, looking at Hao Yun sincerely said.

"It's difficult to build a world view, especially for the film we're going to make."

However——

Hao Yun has his own ideas.

"I don't think the overhead world view will necessarily affect the movie's sense of substitution. As long as it can be justified logically, I even think the overhead world view can create a unique viewing experience, so that the audience doesn't have to worry about the historical background of the story, but focus on the event itself."

"I can probably guess that the script is based on the emotional line, trying to shoot that kind of love across time... Or similar feelings. However, the most fatal thing I feel after reading the script is that the elements are a little too complicated, which dilutes the sense of existence of the main line itself. "

After listening to these words, a touch of deep thinking appeared on the face of the field.

This sentence is in his heart.

It seems that the films he has made in recent years do have this problem.

I want to shoot everything, I want to shoot everything best, but in the end, because of the integration of too many elements, I didn't shoot anything well.

"So how do you think... The script should be changed?"

Looking at the expression of serious consultation on the face of the field, Hao Yun's eyes floated a trace of approval.

not bad

Although the potential is only 1, the unexpected can be persuaded.

It's better than the donkey in his bedroom.

"The reform is very simple. If you delete the unnecessary things, the important things will be highlighted naturally."

After hearing this ambiguous statement, Secretary Li, who had been sitting beside him and didn't speak, had a wry smile on his face.

Wang Xingkai's response was more direct, and he couldn't resist a word.

"It's so easy to say, change the outline... I'll see if you change it."

Hearing this, Hao Yun raised his eyebrows.

well?

Let me change it?

All right!

Hao Yun filled his glass and stood up to drink it.

After brewing for about three or five seconds, he recalled the trivial memories he had learned from the fragments of memory, and came to him with inspiration from a note.

"During the Southern Dynasties, there were a lot of fighting. But Luoyang, where Emperor Wen of the Song Dynasty lived, was full of willows, thousands of ancient temples, picturesque in the prosperous times, and prosperous in a good way. "

Although in his memory, there is no detailed content about the original work of Luoyang Jialan temple, when he unlocked the song "fireworks easy to cold" from the memory fragments, the background story and related memory of the song were also unlocked.

It may be difficult for him to write a script from beginning to end, but if it's just an outline

It's not hard for him.

In response to the three pairs of shocked eyes, Hao Yun continued to say in a tone of monologue.

"Just in this picturesque Luoyang, a general met a folk woman. They fell in love at first sight and decided for life."

"However, the good time did not last long. The Northern Wei Dynasty's army rose suddenly, moved southward, broke through Rouran, crossed the Yellow River, and pointed to Luoyang. On the contrary, the Song Dynasty was defeated many times, and there was no general in the front line to resist the enemy."

"On the one hand, it's the righteousness of the country, on the other hand, it's the love of the children. The general took the woman's hand and promised that he would come back to her, so he turned over and got on the horse. And no one thought that this parting was a parting of life and death. "

"The war disaster continued year after year. Luoyang, the most prosperous city, had already fallen, and the willows were burned to ashes."

"A woman can't wait. She's a nun with her hair shaved. She's next to the ancient green light Buddha. She's gone for the rest of her life."

"Many years later, the general came back after the wind and frost and found Jialan ancient temple, but his sweetheart was no longer there. The old monk who knocked on the wooden fish told him that someone had been waiting for him. "

"The rain is pouring down, the piccolo outside the city is long, the general looks around, the old capital is dilapidated, the mountains and rivers are trampled on, so he becomes a monk and escapes into the empty door. He spends the rest of his life with the ancient Buddha, listening to the eternal rain."

When Hao Yun finished reading the last word, there was a complete silence in the previously bustling box.

Either Director Tian or screenwriter Wang, or Secretary Li, who had no ink in his stomach, all stood there.

Is this a current edition?

And in a minute or two?

Wang Xingkai swallowed his saliva. He could not describe the shock in his heart with words, nor could he contain the inspiration like a fountain.

Almost just after listening to the oral outline, a new script has been formed in his mind. By contrast, the one he wrote before is just dregs!

This is the first time

It's a blast!